Well done Sian, your work is looking great. There is a clear improvement in your front page. The image is more professional looking the American flag works well. Your colour scheme is consistent throughout all pieces, you have clearly thought about the feedback we gave you and made improvements. The only thing you could consider developing is the ‘Contents’ title. The typography used on your front cover and double page is a lot stronger than your contents title. Could you make any alterations to make this title more eye catching? (Miss Sutton)
I like the images used on your contents page but you could ideally do with having a variety of shots, which you have angle wise but not model wise. Do you have any other images you could include?
Well done Sian, your work is looking great. There is a clear improvement in your front page. The image is more professional looking the American flag works well. Your colour scheme is consistent throughout all pieces, you have clearly thought about the feedback we gave you and made improvements.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing you could consider developing is the ‘Contents’ title. The typography used on your front cover and double page is a lot stronger than your contents title. Could you make any alterations to make this title more eye catching?
(Miss Sutton)
I like the images used on your contents page but you could ideally do with having a variety of shots, which you have angle wise but not model wise. Do you have any other images you could include?
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